"as night sweet night reigns" LOVE LOVE LOVE that line. And indeed night IS sweet in the desert.
Judith said it best! Lovely line 'as night sweet night reigns' Beautiful
A powerful image of the desert night ~ Good one ~
Love, love, love that last line. Beautiful haiku.
Last line would go right into classic poetry as well. Very good
Dreamy feeling...deserts fascinate me...
desert night, everything still, scary! nice haiku!
Lovely haiku
Hi Melanie, I'm happy to read one of your haikus. Beautifully done. Hope you are well.
Very well done!PS -- you have CATCHA word recognition turned on -- it is a pain. Pls turn it off.
Thank you all for reading my haiku. Last Sept. I fell down the house stairs. I broke my are and dislocated and ruptured my elbow. Still in great pain and hard to type. Once thanks as it is good to be back.Melanie
Last line has a nice punch ... Parched Bones(Sorry to hear about your mishap ... hope the pain subsides to healing comfort soon)
Yours has a melodious ring to it, I love itI have not submitted anything this week, just going round, admiring - ♥
at last some cool to pacify the heat of the desert daykeep rising, Cassiopeia!
"as night sweet night reigns" LOVE LOVE LOVE that line. And indeed night IS sweet in the desert.
ReplyDeleteJudith said it best! Lovely line 'as night sweet night reigns' Beautiful
ReplyDeleteA powerful image of the desert night ~ Good one ~
ReplyDeleteLove, love, love that last line. Beautiful haiku.
ReplyDeleteLast line would go right into classic poetry as well. Very good
ReplyDeleteDreamy feeling...deserts fascinate me...
ReplyDeletedesert night, everything still, scary! nice haiku!
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku
ReplyDeleteHi Melanie, I'm happy to read one of your haikus. Beautifully done. Hope you are well.
ReplyDeleteVery well done!
ReplyDeletePS -- you have CATCHA word recognition turned on -- it is a pain. Pls turn it off.
Thank you all for reading my haiku. Last Sept. I fell down the house stairs. I broke my are and dislocated and ruptured my elbow. Still in great pain and hard to type. Once thanks as it is good to be back.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
Last line has a nice punch ...
ReplyDeleteParched Bones
(Sorry to hear about your mishap ... hope the pain subsides to healing comfort soon)
Yours has a melodious ring to it, I love it
ReplyDeleteI have not submitted anything this week, just going round, admiring - ♥
at last some cool to pacify the heat of the desert day
ReplyDeletekeep rising, Cassiopeia!